Family Doctor is a short story of a married couple who has been married for years but couldn’t conceive and bare children.
So after many failed attempts they decided to visit a family friend at his hospital who happens to be a doctor to ascertain what the problem is. I hope you enjoy the story.
SCENE 1. INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
Crystal is seated as Jenny comes in very angry.
JENNY
Crystal, where is the spaghetti I kept in the pot?
CRYSTAL
I gave it to Maurice. He came back hungry and I was tired so I gave it to him
JENNY
You gave my food to your husband!
CRYSTAL
Sorry, dear, I will soon go and cook dinner.
JENNY: What stupid dinner? Did I tell you I want your dinner? What did you do that got you tired please? Because all you do is sit here lazing about every day.
CRYSTAL
Jenny, it hasn’t gotten to that
JENNY
Like hell it has. You do absolutely nothing. The only thing that you are supposed to do joyfully, you have still failed.
What does it take to conceive, Crystal? All the times you keep me sleepless at night with your moans, what are they for? Just to satisfy your desires and not my brother’s desire for a child.
CRYSTAL
Jenny!
JENNY
That’s my name! The next time I see your barren hand close to anything I keep, you wouldn’t like what I shall do to you.
Jenny walks away angrily as tears drop down Crystal’s eyes.
SCENE 2. INT. BEDROOM – LATER
Crystal is crying as door opens and Maurice enters. He is wearing casuals.
MAURICE
Hey babes… How are…?
Maurice notices Crystal and rushes to her
MAURICE
Babes, what’s the problem? Why are you crying?
CRYSTAL
Why is my case different? Why is God doing this to me?
MAURICE
What is wrong? What happened?
CRYSTAL
Why can’t I have my own child? Even if it’s just one
MAURICE
Babe we have already talked about this several times and I told you He will give us a child at his appointed time.
CRYSTAL
And when is this appointed time? Is it when I am dead?
MAURICE
God forbid! Nobody is dying… Listen babes, don’t let this bother you, alright? I am here for you and that’s all that matters.
CRYSTAL
For how long Maurice? How long when your family has already started calling me barren?
MAURICE
My family call you barren! No that can’t be true…
CRYSTAL
Jenny called me barren earlier simply because she cooked the spaghetti I gave you in the morning.
MAURICE
Jenny called you, barren? Crystal nods as Maurice storms out.
SCENE 3. INT. LIVING ROOM – CONTINUOUS
Maurice barges into the living room followed by Crystal to find Jenny seated over a call.
MAURICE
Put away that phone (No response). If you don’t put away that phone this moment, I will break on top of your head!
Jenny ends the calla and drops phone.
JENNY
What is the meaning of this?
MAURICE
Did you call my wife barren?
JENNY: Isn’t that what she is? Maurice slaps her as Crystal holds him back.
CRYSTAL
Stop it babes…
MAURICE
Let me deal with this disrespectful thing! Does my wife look like your mate? Did I marry her for you? If you are so eager to have an additional member of the family, why don’t you go and marry and have yours?
JENNY
Brother, you slapped me!
MAURICE
And I shall slap you even more if you ever disrespect my wife.
JENNY
Well, I guess that’s it then. I am leaving first thing in the morning.
MAURICE
With all pleasure.
Jenny walks away as does Maurice. Crystal is dumbfounded.
SCENE 4. INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT
Maurice is seated as Crystal comes to him
CRYSTAL
Babes, about what happened…
MAURICE
Crystal, if it’s about Jenny, I don’t want to hear it…
There is slight pause before she continues
CRYSTAL
I was thinking we can go see Jason in the morning.
MAURICE
We have done that before.
CRYSTAL
Not at his hospital.
MAURICE
What difference does it make?
CRYSTAL
He is your best friend and has your interest at heart. He will be more detailed and proffer solutions.
MAURICE
We have already been certified alright
CRYSTAL
I know but can you please do this last one for me? please, babe?
JAOSN
Fine… Tomorrow then
Crystal kisses him.
SCENE 5. INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
Maurice is seated as Crystal walks to him.
MAURICE
He babes, you are up?
CRYSTAL
Couldn’t sleep
MAURICE
Why?
CRYSTAL
Don’t know… Babes, what’s up with the results? It’s been twenty four hours already
MAURICE
Jason said he will call once they are ready.
CRYSTAL
He also said on or before twenty four hours. So why don’t you call him to know what’s up?
MAURICE
Is that necessary?
CRYSTAL
It is to me babes, please…
MAURICE:
Fine.
Maurice dials number and waits a while as Jason answers.
MAURICE
Jason how far?
JASON VO
I dey o… I dey road de come your house sef
MAURICE
Any wahala?
JASON VO
No. I go soon reach.
Jason hangs up.
CRYSTAL
So?
MAURICE
He is on his way here?
CRYSTAL
Oh, okay…
SCENE 6. INT. LIVING ROOM – MOMENT LATER
Maurice is seated with Crystal as Jason addresses them.
MAURICE
Guy this one wey you carry result come house so. Hope all is well
JASON
Yes, all is well… I was in the neighbour to attend to a private patient so I decided to stop by
MAURICE
Okay… So, how far?
CRYSTAL
Yes, what is the result, Jason?
JASON
All, it is fine. Your results show that both of you are okay.
MAURICE
You see what I told you.
CRYSTAL
So, why haven’t I been able to conceive?
JASON
Patience, Crystal, children would at God’s appointment time. Just don’t stop trying.
MAURICE
Same thing I have been telling her.
SECEN 7. INT. MAURICE’S CAR – LATER
Jason is with Crystal. She is crying.
JASON
I called you out here because what I am about to share with you is confidential.
CRYSTAL
What is it, Jason?
JASON
It’s about the test result
CRYSTAL
It said we are alright. That was what you said
JASON: I am afraid but that wasn’t entirely true
CRYSTAL
What do you mean?
JASON
You are free and perfectly alright.
CRYSTAL
And my husband?
JASON
I am afraid but he has a very low sperm count it is unlikely that he will be able to get a woman pregnant.
CRYSTAL
What?
JASON
I am sorry, Crystal. I couldn’t tell Maurice the truth because it will break him and that might mean the end to your marriage. I know how much you love him and what this marriage means to you.
CRYSTAL
What am I supposed to do now? Just continue living with him and pretending like everything is okay?
JASON
Yes… But you are okay and can have your own children.
CRYSTAL
Will I impregnate myself?
JASON
I will do it for you.
Camera zooms into Crystal’s shocked face.
SCENE 8. INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
Crystal emerges from kitchen with hand towel just as Maurice descends the stairs ready for work.
CRYSTAL
You are leaving, babes?
MAURICE: Yes, I have an early appointment
CRYSTAL
And the breakfast?
MAURICE
I will do early lunch at the office.
CRYSTAL
Alright.
MAURICE
Are you alright? You have been uncharacteristically cold since you got back from the mall yesterday
CRYSTAL
I am fine, babes… Now you go to work.
MAURICE
I love you
CRYSTAL
I love you more…
Maurice leaves as Crystal looks at her phone then dials.
CRYSTAL
Hello, Maurice.
SCENE: 9. INT. BEDROOM – LATER
Door opens as Jason barges in kissing Crystal intensely. They fall on the bed as shot dissolves.
MOMENT LATER
They are both in bed after making out.
JASON
That was heavenly
CRYSTAL
I feel terrible
JASON: Don’t… You are doing the right thing. And I assure you that aside getting you pregnant, I guarantee you the best sex ever.
CRYSTAL
This isn’t about the sex for me, Jason.
JASON
Alright…
CRYSTAL
Come and get going before he returns
JASON
But this is still morning.
CRYSTAL
Yes, we have done it, haven’t we? So come and go.
Jason looks at her and gets off the bed. He dresses off.
JASON
I will be expecting your next call.
Jason leaves as tears drop down Crystal’s eyes.
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